Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Original Cuttings

The following is an example of things I looked to cut:

Good Helicane, that stay'd at home,
Not to eat honey like a drone
From others' labours; for though he strive
To killen bad, keep good alive;
And to fulfil his prince' desire,
Sends word of all that haps in Tyre:
How Thaliard came full bent with sin
And had intent to murder him;
And that in Tarsus was not best
Longer for him to make his rest.
He, doing so, put forth to seas,
Where when men been, there's seldom ease;
For now the wind begins to blow;
Thunder above and deeps below
Make such unquiet, that the ship
Should house him safe is wreck'd and split;
And he, good prince, having all lost,
By waves from coast to coast is tost:
All perishen of man, of pelf,
Ne aught escapen but himself;
Till fortune, tired with doing bad,
Threw him ashore, to give him glad:
And here he comes. What shall be next,

The above said by Gower really serves not much purpose rather than to recap the play. In a play that most likely has time constraints, a recap is probably not favorable. Not to mention, the narrator  would appreciate the relieving of these lines.

Another example of something I cut:

Were all too little to content and please,
Although they gave their creatures in abundance,
As houses are defiled for want of use,
They are now starved for want of exercise:
Those palates who, not yet two summers younger,
Must have inventions to delight the taste,
Would now be glad of bread, and beg for it:
Those mothers who, to nousle up their babes,
Thought nought too curious, are ready now
To eat those little darlings whom they loved.

The above is said by Cleon before Pericles is in Tarsus giving them the wheat. Cleon pretty much goes on and on and on about how hungry the people of his land are. We get it, they are beyond famished. I think that a few examples would suffice rather to lengthen the scene and lose the audience's attention. Additionally, much more dramatic examples can serve the purpose fine such as:

So sharp are hunger's teeth, that man and wife
Draw lots who first shall die to lengthen life:
Here stands a lord, and there a lady weeping;
Here many sink, yet those which see them fall
Have scarce strength left to give them burial.

If that is not polarizing to paint an image of the hunger problems, I don't know what is.

Monday, April 2, 2012

Magical Endings

I think that the ending of Pericles, Prince of Tyre is in a word, overwhelming. A family that has been completely separated throughout the Meditaranean region has been yearning for each other for so long. each one of the family members has faced his or her own struggles that complicates the possibility of the family reuniting. In Act 5, Pericles is completely shocked to hear that the young girl's name is Marina. After the long 14 year "search" (since we don't know what happened), the family is finally reunited. Additionally, I also feel that the grand, magical ending contributes to some of the play's main themes: virtue and perseverance. Not many more things are virtuous than constantly working at a goal for 14 years without knowing the outcome. I feel that this ending is better experienced in person as I recall going to Pericle, Prince of Tyre produced by the HTC. Although I like to think myself a little more on the masculine side, I will totally admit I teared up at the ending!

Scene Ideas

I think that the most interesting way to fix the fourteen year gap is to have Pericles embark on an epic journey. In general, something very significant must have occurred in those fourteen years for Pericles to have been stranded from his daughter who he knew was in Tarsus. What could Pericles possibly been doing? We are given no clues in the text either as to where he could have gone or what purposes he had, so it is complete fantasy as to what he did. All forms of fantasy on this matter are equally valid basically as there is no compelling argument either way.

I think most people, however, do not pick up on a subtle clue. This clue came inspired to me through an economic idea called "opportunity cost." An opportunity cost is the cost of giving up the next best thing. So the opportunity cost of going to see a movie would be working, for example. We know that the opportunity cost of Pericles doing whatever he did for those 14 years was giving up being able to see his daughter. So whatever Pericles did for fourteen years, he must have had quite a compelling reason.

This now leaves us with 2 kinda of decisions: involuntary and voluntary. An involuntary decision to fill the 14 year gap would be perhaps that Pericles got shipwrecked again!!! However, I think the shipwreck theme would make me weary and I would want something Pericles deliberately does; in other words, embark on an epic journey.

Quizlet!!